Family Secrets - Revelation - Chapter 26
This next chapter will begin to reveal some of the questions you have. In the end all will be well for all the Barkley’s, but we have a ways to go.Nick, Heath, Eugene and Audra were still in the...
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lots of things happened in a short period to Jarrod but the way you have him dealing with it just doesn't sit right with the person he is. Though I guess keeping too much in would make anyone explode...
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I have to keep telling myself this whole thing started with a challenge to make Jarrod a cad. Tough for me to work from that beginning in the first place, but still hanging in, hoping for redemption.
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For a guy who is a lawyer.. did he forget sometimes what is seen and what is really going on are two differant things. Sober up Jarrod and look at things as they are Not what you think they are. Guess...
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While this Jarrod makes me smile - as it is so out of character LOL but any of them could easily act like that if so portrayed and well done Mary for knowing your boy so well to enable you to do that,...
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it probably would have been easier on you, as jb's angel, to have written this "jarrod as cad" challenge as just that..a natural born cad from beginning to end. didn't rl always want to portray the...
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Jarrod assuming you know what is going on without really talking with the people involved makes you a fool. Straighten up. Great story and writing. It is keeping me wanting more.
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Interesting how up until now it has 'seemed' to be Tom's behavior that pushed Jarrod over the edge, so to find out that it was actually Victoria's actions, makes this story sizzle. Jarrod would, as...
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I understand that Richard Long originally wanted to play Jarrod as a bit of a cad. This story makes me think of that. The series would have been quite a bit different.
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You are doing a good job of moving the story along without fixing things up too fast. Have to wonder at Jarrod's decision: my father's an adulterer and my mother's - well what exactly (engaging in...
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love the switch from Tom's behavior affecting Jarrod to Victoria's--great twist! always love new chapters of this story! This is such an interesting Jarrod--can't wait to see how you bring him back...
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